Introduction
Cherry believes that the unfair accusation from Philip is mainly due to his ignorance of some facts behind what he could see. Also, his poor management was the result of his wrong assumptions. Cherry believes that these are the reasons that Philip had put the wrong focus to solve the company’s operation problem. As Cherry wants to get fair treatment and at the same time she wishes the company’s operation to be improved, writing a letter of complaint to let Philip knows the true reason behind the poor department performance is a good channel. That will not only help to resolve the conflict situation between Cherry and Philip but also help to divert Philip’s management focus to the right direction.
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Complaint Letter
Mr. Philip Wong
Head of Personal Insurance Division
Smart Insurance Company Limited
19/F, 1 Boston Road, Hong Kong
Dear Mr. Wong,
I believe I am a loyal employee in this company for the past 12 years. Recently, I feel that I am not being treated fairly. This letter is a formal complaint against the lack of communication and unfair treatment that I have encountered since you have been appointed to lead the Personal Insurance Division last year.
In December 2014, you said that you would have to review my team’s performance and effectiveness. Since then, you have been criticizing my work and making unfavorable comments on me to some of my team members. I am being accused of not completing my daily work despite me fulfilling and achieving the sales target. Sometimes, I have been kept out of the team meetings because your assistant forgot to inform me about the changes of meeting schedule. As you found that there is a sharp increase in customer complaints, you blamed it on me. However, you ignored my explanation of the reasons behind and did not try to figure out the true reason.
Below are some things that you may have missed out and I would like to share with you:
1. There is 50% increase in my premiums sold as compared to last year Q1. This increase was not able to be reflected on the Management Report due to the many of the policies sold were still pending for approval. As feedback from most clients, competitors usually issue the policy to them within 10 working days. However, we have to take at least 5-6 weeks. As a result, half of our clients requested to withdraw the policy within the cooling-off period due to late issuance of policy. Recently, there are two newly joined underwriting managers who are responsible for approving the policies. They spent much longer time than the previous underwriting managers to approve the policies. I knew these two new colleagues are related parties of you. I will be glad if all colleagues’ work efficiency can be judged fairly despite of their relationship with anyone in the company.
2. Recently, our hotline center received many customer complaints about the incorrect information on their policies documents such as incorrect policyholder name, incorrect insured items, and incorrect premium discount, etc. Even there are some premiums being overcharged from client’s banking accounts. There were 500 dispute cases per month (i.e. 10% of policy issued). The case details can be retrieved from the “Monthly Customer Complaints & Grievances Report”. Upon investigation, these incidents were due to the shortage of manpower in Policy Administration Department. The staff turnover rate of the department was 50% in the past three months. This resulted in the high volume of policy termination as well as loss of customers’ loyalty and trust.
3. Due to the long processing time and incorrect policy information, 70% of incoming calls were customer complaints in which both the talking time and turn-around time for case follow up were triple than our ordinary business. Although all of us made the best effort to shorten the conversation and speed up the follow up action, the service level of our hotline couldn’t be maintained in these three months. In the worst situation, the long call queue and low call pick-up rate would make customer frustrated and got angry with our services. It would be a big challenge for us to acquire new businesses if no further improvement on the quality of our policy.
4. Every day I had to deal with such customer complaints and also spend most time to follow up the matter with those affected customers. Even though there is no overtime compensation, I was willing to work late till 10pm every day in order to speed up the case settlement and reduce customer dissatisfaction as much as possible. Under my hard work, 95% complaint cases could be managed and settled within 3 working days. However, my hard work had never been appreciated.
Honestly, I had never encountered such problems from my previous manager, Ms Kay Wu, who are now the Head of Commercial Insurance Division.
During the past few months, I had raised my concerns to you for at least four times. I tried asking for a formal meeting to further discuss on this matter. However, you were no show for the first meeting and refused to talk to me in the second meeting because you suddenly had a lunch appointment with friends. In the third meeting, you expressed that my behavior was very immature and unprofessional while instructed me to stop complaining and just do my job.
I was very disappointed about the unfair treatment to me. No matter how well I perform in my job, I would not be recognized for my efforts and contribution. This unfair treatment had a negative impact on my productivity and morale. I really enjoy my work but it becomes increasingly difficult for me to maintain a high performing team because of the unfair treatment. I have no alternative to take this step for bringing the matter to your attention as you did not give me a chance to meet face to face.
I am seeking your help in resolving these problems that I am experiencing at work. I would be grateful if I could have the chance to talk to you at your convenience.
Yours sincerely,
Cherry
Customer Service Manager
Sales & Service Department
Personal Insurance Division
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Analysis:
Complaints aroused from Omission & Lack of communication
Cherry was being accused of poor performance by Philip. In the letter, we can see the differences between Cherry and Philips’. Philip was accusing her while he is defending. Obviously Cherry is reluctant to agree with Philip’s comments. The below shows Cherry and Philips’ communication:
Red for Cherry’s; Blue for Philip
Figure 1:
Their communication lines are parallel and there is no overlapping talking point. Therefore, their communication channel is not correct. That’s why Cherry feels upset about the negative comments. In the letter, it shows Philip did not pay attention to Cherry’s explanation although she tried to raise the concerns to him for 4 times. It is an intentional ignorance. In the letter, Cherry had pointed out to Philip that she had voiced out to talk to him directly but Philip had ignored. For Philip, he only focused on the management report for the reported sales figure. What he saw in the report did not reflect the reality. As Cherry explained, the lower sales figures in the report does not mean she had not made enough insurance policies sales. Her premiums sold even got an increase as compared to last year. Her effort was not reflected in the management report. Philip also omitted the reasons of receiving increasing number of complaints. His only focus was only on Cherry’s Sales & Service Department. In his perception, customers’ complaints must be related to the department’s service but not from other reason. He ignored to investigate the content of the customers’ complaints and so did not realize customers’ dissatisfaction were due to slow processing and incorrect information of the insurance policies. So, these are the information that Philip omitted. To bring Philip back to the truth, Cherry had explained the reason of the low sales figures and the content of the customers’ complaints, which is because of the slow approving process of the policies. Moreover, Philip had ignored the fact of high staff turnover rate of Policy Administration Department. When figuring out the reasons of receiving more complaints, Sales & Service Department should not be the only responsible party. By pointing out this, Philip should be aware that he ignored this kind of fact. Another thing Philip had ignored was Cherry’s effort. In the letter, Cherry tried best to explain she had put best effort to settle customers’ dissatisfaction. This is a good chance for Cherry to point this out as Philip as a boss, did not realize what Cherry’s team had done to help the company in this adverse situation. This helps to change Philip’s perception on Cherry and her team. He had bad impression on Cherry and her team because he did not realize what they had done to settle the customers’ complaints. By pointing out what Cherry and her team had done, the letter helps to solve the problem of Philip’s ignorance of their effort.
Figure 2: The Shannon-Weaver Mathematical Model
Shannon, C. E. A (1949) Mathematical Theory of Communication. Bell System Technical Journal, vol. 27, pp. 379-423 and 623-656, July and October, 1948.
According to Shannon’s communication process model, it is a conceptual model to explain how human beings communicate. Cherry (the information source) to explain the difficulties by talking (transmitter) to Philip in a meeting (channel) and Philip (the receiver) listened. However it seems the message doesn’t go to Philip’s brain or mind (destination). He gave no feedback at all. This creates miscommunication. Miscommunication refers to fail to communicate clearly. There are many reasons for miscommunication such as: office romance, assumptions, favoritism, criticism and non cooperation. In this case, assumption is the major problem. Philip has a roughly assumption on Cherry. (SpeedupCareer, 2015)
Miscommunication can cause severe damages for a business such as drop in revenue and productivity, investment lost, lost of human assets, etc.
Miscommunication generates Cherry’s negative feelings. She is upset, anxious, nervous or even angry by what Philip has done. A negative emotion can influence employee’s performance. At the end, the company suffers. As Philip refused to communicate with Cherry face-to-face, she brought up his attention by writing the letter. This is the only way that Cherry can do to “communicate” with Philip. The letter helped Cherry to bring up the issues that Philip ignored as he refused to communicate. Communication is the only way to provide channel for them to arrive at a viable solution to the situation.
Complaints aroused from Differences
We are all human beings but the most interesting part is that we are all different but why don’t we all see eye to eye? It’s because of our different education, family backgrounds, life experience, etc. We have different values, perceptions and beliefs. We select difference aspects of a message to focus our attention based on what interests us, what is familiar to us or what we consider important. (McLean, 2012) Philip selectively believed what he is interested to see, such as there is a sharp increase of customer complains. He only saw Cherry’s poor performance and ineffectiveness, however, Philip didn’t see the reasons behind.
Why do we see things differently? It is because of the involvement of our senses and what we like to choose to experience by our context and environment. Our habits, values and outlook on life are influenced by where we come from and where we are. (McLean, 2012)
As in the case, Philip did not listen to Cherry by sitting down together in a formal or informal meeting. He did not give feedback to Cherry’s explanation and her concern about the difficulties Cherry is facing. In Cherry’s angle, as her manager, he also did not help Cherry to manage her stress level about the conflict. Due to the different understanding of the facts with Cherry, Philip refused to talk to Cherry and keeps on accusing her. By writing the letter, Cherry brought out facts in her points of view. In Cherry’s point of view, increasing customers complaints are mainly caused by incorrect policy information, over-charged premiums, long processing time, etc. These are not in Philip’s mind. Cherry clearly pointed out in the letter for these facts and it helped Philip to look at the matter in another point of view. For Philip, what he saw is only decreasing sales and increasing complaints. In his understanding, these were caused by Cherry’s team. The different understanding of Philip with Cherry is the main reason for the current conflict situation. The letter clearly told Philip these are not caused by Cherry’s team but other departments. Since he rejected to listen to the reasons explained by Cherry, the letter can provide a channel for Philip to understand these in a calm way.
Avoid Climbing the Ladder of Inference
It is highly likely that Philip could have drawn wrong inferences on Cherry’s poor performance based his bias and the adverse comments provided by the two newly joined and inexperienced managers who are also related parties of Philip. By referring to the materials appended in the letter, Philip should be able to select the reality and facts through the reasoning process in the ladder of influence. By pointing out the fact that these two newly joined underwriting managers are related parties of Philip, he got a chance to climb down the ladder of inference again to rethink the reasonableness of his perception. He should consider this factor when he draws his conclusion about the reasons of the decreasing sales and increasing number of complains.
The compliant letter could help Philip to draw better conclusions. It could help Philip to analyze the evidence and data such as sales figures and the “Monthly Customer Complaints & Grievances Report”. It would allow Philip to form opinions and judgment impartially based on the true facts and reality. The letter could help Cherry to check if her arguments are sound enough to validate or challenge Philip and other people's conclusions. The complaint letter could also be used to challenge Philip’s assumption. Apparently, Philip did not pay attention to Cherry’s explanation and selected the facts based on his own beliefs and experience. He jumped up the ladder and assumed that the poor performance and the upsurge of complaint figures were mainly due to the laziness of Cherry’s team. Once Philip has the opportunity to read the complaint letter, he would have changed his assumption and focused on addressing the issues with Cherry.
Resolving the Conflict situation
According to Jain (2005), conflict is a process that begins when one party perceives another party has negatively affected or is about to negatively affect, something that the first party cares about. Obviously, Cherry cared about the accusations of Philip and concerned about the way he handled her complaint. It is considered that root cause of the conflict was mainly due to the failure of Philip in fully appreciating Cherry’s situation and institutionalizing an effective mechanism in handling conflict.
The conflict between Cherry and Philip can be regarded as relationship conflict which primary based on interpersonal relationships dysfunction. Philip has all along been adopting a passive and avoidance approach to handle the conflict with Cherry’s as he thought the issue was trivial. He was not willing to interact with Cherry in order to avoid unnecessary direct confrontation. On the contrary, Cherry takes proactive and collaborative approach by proposing a meeting with Philip and writing him a compliant letter with a view to incorporating his concerns into a consensus.
Weiss and Hughes (2005) commented that conflict management works best when the parties involved in a disagreement are equipped to manage it themselves. The aim of the complaint letter is to get Cherry and Philip back to the negotiation table to resolve conflict on their own so as to allow them to improve their relationship.
Powerful ways to resolve disputes without 3rd party direct intervention
As in the case, Philip had selected some data and put it in his own interpretation, such as sales data. Reported sales data could not reflect the actual premiums sold because of the slow policy approving process. By elaborating the reason of why the sales data could not reflect the actual policies sold, the letter had brought Philip down the ladder of inference. Philip should then interpret the sales data again with the reason behind.
To bring Philip’s attention to the real reason of increasing customer complaints, the letter had pointed out the long processing time of policies and incorrect policy information. By focusing on these reasons, Philip should know the responsibility is not on Sales and Service department.
In the letter, Cherry also pointed out she is not happy about the unfair treatment from Philip. She described her effort made to settle customers’ complaints. She also told Philip that she did not mind to work overtime for the benefit of the company and customers. These are the facts that Philip had overlooked before. Philip assumed Cherry did not complete her daily work. By pointing out what Cherry was doing every day in the letter, Philip was brought down to the bottom of the ladder of inference and should start to observe the situation again.
Since Cherry had tried to talk to Philip but not succeeded, writing a letter is the only way to provide solid evidence that Cherry had given a trial to communicate. Cherry had provided a solution in the letter, such as they can sit down together to talk about the issue. If there is no communication between Cherry and Philip, the dispute can never be resolved. The letter is a channel to bring Philip’s attention to Cherry and let him start to resolve the issue.
Help an injured person to deal with feelings & the disruption in life
Since Cherry is not quite comfortable with the current situation, she could voice out her feeling about Philip’s ignorance and unfair treatment in the letter. She pointed out that she likes her job and would like to contribute to the company. No matter Philip will look into the matter after reading the letter, Cherry had tried her best to voice out her feeling and this surely will help her to lessen her pressure.
References:
Speedupcareer (2015) Miscommunication In The Workplace, available from http://www.speedupcareer.com/articles/miscommunication-in-the-workplace.html, accessed 31 March 2015
N.K. Jain (2005) Organizational Behaviour. India: Atlantic
McLean, S. (2012) Communication for Business Success, Chile, Creative Commons
Jeff Weiss and Jonathan Hughes (2005) Want Collaboration? Accept- and Actively Manage - Conflict










Dear Team 1,
ReplyDeleteGreat job done! Without effective mutual communication with Mr. Wong, this letter can not only release dissatisfaction, but also, it can explain the key problem to him. When I read the letter, I can feel the anger.
Yet, making a complaint in a large organization is not that easy as we have imagined. For a large company, the routine they deal with problems is to conceal or ignore instead of solving problems. If the problem is not that big or obvious, large organization tend to ignore without solving. The reason I guess is that even small errors can lead to big disasters, people tend to conceal the problem since it is really easier than solving that immediately. Thus, in this complaint letter, the problem seems quite small. In my assumption, tyranny Mr. Wong will not take action to inspect or to take actions immediately. I suggest you enlarge the problem. One way is to find more victims, such as your team members. The more victims, the more serious the problem is. When Mr. Wong realizes that he cannot ignore the problem since it is big, he will take action to solve that.
The second suggestion is about evidence. Through reading the complaint letter, I got to know that it is like chain reaction. Slow policy review leads to deduction of customers and wrong charge leads to customers complaints. When small error mixes, heavy burden was put on Cherry's team. As the leader, Cherry undertakes the majority part. Besides helping Mr. Wong go down from the ladder of inference, you need to tell him that you have evidence or record. For Mr. Wong, his relatives are working as policy reviewers, thus, he tends to protect his family members. If you do not have solid evidence, he can claim that hey Cherry, you have not done good job and you attribute accountability to my beloved. Maybe it is hard to get evidence from his relatives or assistant, but you can ask your team members to provide you with them. Equipped you with hard copies of evidence can help you win the conflict.
DeleteFor me, to show or release details of the problem in the letter is a good way to urge the bad boss to take action. Yet, I think there is another way. This way is to take the other party's perspective and to come up with a solution. Mr. Wong refused to meet face to face with Cherry through several excuses. In the letter, you can tell him that well, Mr. Wong, I know that you are quite busy with your work, in order to solve this problem before it goes large, I have viewed your lasted schedule. In your schedule, you are free at 4:00 pm Tuesday after the meeting with my team. Please just leave me 5 minutes to talk. Whenever you got the chance to meet him individually, you can use him more than 5 minutes.
DeleteOf course, with solid evidence and failure meeting schedule, Cherry still has one more choice. I do not recommend this choice since it is not that good in building long term relationship. The last choice for Cherry is to threat the other party to meet her and to solve the problem. Cherry can tell Mr. Wong that I totally understand that you are quite busy, but if we do not solve the problem, we are faced with high rate of resignation. Furthermore, if this situation happens, I have to report to your supervisor about what had happened before. Or, you can put that Mr. Wong, even if I have been working in this company for a long time, I have got offers from other companies with higher salary and more bonus. If you do not solve the problem with me, I will leave the company. As I leave here, manager of other departments will leave or they will wonder about the reason. At that time, I will reveal everything to them. Above all, shame or threat is not advised in using to solve conflicts. Solving the conflict through negotiation can be beneficial for both Cherry and Mr. Wong.
DeleteThx Joy for your comments. They are very useful and constructive. Talking about to enlarge the problem and involves as many Victims as possible. We have to be very careful here. If we handle it wrongly. It becomes a HR problem rather than a work problem.
ReplyDeleteTo push Mr. Wong to meet sounds feasible however pushing too hard makes Mr. Wong dislikes Cherry. Cherry should be very very careful.
In this case if there is no progress, I strongly suggest cherry to file a formal complain to HR. Get HR involves to solve the problem. But there is a risk of cherry's bad reputation in the company.
Well, there is no fairness in business. We need capabilities to do our job but the most important thing is, we need a lot of luck.
Agree?
Good job! I really learn many things from your blog. In the beginning, YOU provided the specific situation and the whole complaint letter for the readers. I can learn and have big empathy for the character in your case. The complaint letter is well structured and clear. I found reasons and persuasive statements in the complaint letter. And then, you provided some analysis for the whole conflicts, why they have conflict, what are the root reason, and how to solve this situation and how to avoid climbing the ladder of inference. I admit that unfair treatment really influence every worker in the company. Improper solution will lead the conflict to worst one. So, I think your topic is realistic and meaningful.
ReplyDeleteThis case shows a common phenomenon in company, which employees sometimes cannot agree with the performance evaluation of them given by their manager. Usually, this kind of condition will cause many frustrated situation in the office, which, to some extent, can influence the morale. The evaluation may be fair enough, but if employees cannot have a chance to explain themselves, and find out the true reasons, they will not accept the evaluation, at the same time, they will be disappointed with the company.
ReplyDeleteTherefore, from this case, I suddenly realize in the future management practice, I should pay attention to this problem. And in my opinion, given the performance evaluation is not the purpose, what we want to achieve is to let our employees really understand their problems. Most importantly, we should give them a chance to explain them, showing them we are willing to know about their voice. If their explanation is reasonable, we should apologize to them and amend the evaluation.
So, it is necessary to build a channel for employees to express themselves, rather than give them evaluation no matter what.
The most attractive objective in analysis is to you derived shannon weaver model to interpret the communication flaw. As we all know, when the signal transfers from one end to another, there must be a loss of energy in the process. It is similiar with that between publisher and reciever in human communication. Face-to-face communication is the best way to express their feelings.
ReplyDeleteHi, this is 53926420. Thanks for sharing such a good story. I think Cherry is really a good sincere and hardworking employee, proactively considering for company always. Sometimes we may face such new leaders, from their aspect, they may not want to hurt us, but they may consider set up his informal group, he just check everyone's performance without saying directly, and maybe Cherry hasn't been in his group.
ReplyDeleteAnyway, for the complaining letter, it's good method to avoid emotional quarrel. My suggestion, Cherry can collect some real proof like contracts copy, customer calling records, it will benefit her later.
This is 53935415
ReplyDeleteYour story is strait forward which can inform us a concrete background to learn the story. the conflict point is clear, and... I think this letter is full of anger which might not be a smart way to write a letter and require a solution.
The analysis part is quite interesting, you first analysis the problem they have, and introduce a resolving way to solve the problem,Mr.Wong an d Cherry will have a nice solution according to the 3rd party theory you provide.
It is not common to write a formal complain letter to your direct supervisor in Hong Kong, so I guess Cherry should be very angry and really wanted to be fairly evaluated about her performance. Yet, may I know the reason why Cherry did not write this letter to Philip's boss? Philip may totally ignore this letter and Cherry's situation can go worse after that.
ReplyDeleteOverall, your team analyze very well in communication conflicts. It is very interesting to use different angles to see why Philip neglected to talk to Cherry. I enjoy the Shannon-Weaver Mathematical Model very much, the brain activities would really affect what we think and how we react. It would be much better if your group can talk more about it, e.g. how miscommunication would affect Philip?
Actually I believe there should have some hidden problems that we do not know, however, it is already a very proactive way for Cherry as she really likes her job. May I know how Philip does respond to Cherry? Is there any improvement of their relationship afterwards?
The letter provided very detail description on the situation. The analysis is logical and gives me a lot things to learn. And this blog provides a example to me on "how to discuss the different evaluation on performance with boss." Thank you
ReplyDeleteBy reading through this case, I think that not only Phillip has climbed up the Ladder of Inference, but Cherry also did. The letter itself has been highly emotional and has mostly challenged on Philip's ability to lead the team properly. Given people would least prefer personal attacks, the negative comments towards Philips' work probably won't help with the situation, but rather create more emotional blocks among Philip and Cherry in resolving the conflict. As a suggestion, I would recommend Cheery to take a more cautious approach in the letter by tuning down her emotional thoughts and focus more on factual data. Based on facts, Cherry shall provide actual solution plans in solving the problems that she see. In that sense, Philip as a manager would not lose face. At the same time, he would be able to see that Cherry is actually capable of solving problems but not creating more problems for him.
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